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| Mephisto~656 |
Posted: 27 August 2007, 11:12 AM
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Okidoki, the first one is from Poetry Club last year. It was a required one >>; But anyhow, It's supposed to be about what you think others think of you. So, here ya go... -Simplicity- To you, I might just look like some run-down punk. Or even...a satanist. But please understand... I am no different than you. I bleed, I speak, I laugh. Just like you right? Or is it, that I'm the normal one and all of you are the strange ones? Is that it? Must be. I only look different. Doesn't mean I am. It's the simplest of things really... I guess I'll just laugh back at all you rotten people. Leave you to your stubborn simplicity. ----- Okidoki, there it is. XD I haven't even looked at that one since I started PC... So, what'dya think??? -------------------
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| Mephisto~656 |
Posted: 27 August 2007, 11:23 AM
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XD Yet another...from PC. Actually I think almost all of them are from PC... >>; -Paint- I can see now. The soft fluttering of auburn strands. Pale white mixes with the light palette of pinks reds and peaches. The static colour of green around. The soft black cloth that envelopes the body, Rustles in the light, cherry scented breeze. The lithe body in front of me is a soothing sight. I can see now. This huge canvas covered with so many vibrant colours? It's clear as river water now. This beautiful palette, Is You. v~v this one makes me sad...I wrote it for someone I really loved...but then I got screwed over...so It's kinda hard on me... But I still think this is one of my favourite poems I've written. -------------------
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| Shugo-kun |
Posted: 27 August 2007, 11:28 AM
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The first one, not so much. The second one, much better. It's a shame the metaphor for a canvas is hackneyed, but in its simplicity is a good little bit. Let's see some more. o: -------------------
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| Mephisto~656 |
Posted: 27 August 2007, 11:29 AM
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Fwee~ I think I'll just post my poem book all today...cos there's nothing else to do lol. This one is pretty dark...It scared my Science teacher -Mercy- The warm red liquid sprays across my cheeks and lips. I wipe my eyes, mixing blood with tears. My knife is dripping with your warm essence. It spreads beneath you and trickles over my bare feet, staining them red. I bet you think this was done out of malice. But, it's the opposite. It was for mercy. I saw you suffering terribly. It crushed me. My heart broke. The only way to give you back your happiness, Was to take your life. I sit here and sob into my blood-soaked hands. I hope you realize how much I miss you. ---- >>;; -------------------
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| Mephisto~656 |
Posted: 27 August 2007, 11:31 AM
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^^ Thank you Shugo I don't like the first one either, but It's the first one in my poem book so... >>; -------------------
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| Mephisto~656 |
Posted: 27 August 2007, 11:43 AM
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Wooo I'm on a roll...XD So the next one will kill me to put up, but I love it... -24ko Cylinders- 24 cylinders. Give me Laugh. Everyone feels. Give me Pain. If time should end. Give me High. This dream that is. Give me Nothing. Full of contradictions will... Give me Laugh. An insincere smile. Give me Pain for every lie I've told. Give me High. Love has lost. Give me Nothing. A place to go. Your unreachable love. My unreachable love. Even now, look at it... Your unreachable voice. My unreachable voice. Even now, look at it... But... Give me Laugh. With every time we've embraced. Give me Pain. Can I love you? Give me High. Who I am. Give me Nothing. Full of contradictions will. Time will end. Time will change. Me. You. And now. Will be branded into the flow of time. Time will stop. At the end of time we'll kiss. And sleep in this love without warmth. An end begins a trivial matter. It's a time to burn everything. If I could forget you without hesitation... Serious injury laughs at me. The time is changing. The passage of time burns me. You. And now. Into the flow of time. The time is over. The time will stop. At the end of time. Sleeping with a kiss to unheated death. Will you voice reach my very core? But... Time will end. Time will change. Me. You. And now. Will be branded into the flow of time. We'll kiss and then sleep in this love without warmth. Give me Nothing. If time should end. ---- ...............I don't know what to say... -------------------
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| Mephisto~656 |
Posted: 27 August 2007, 11:49 AM
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...Okay...After that one, we need a happy memory time~ -Winter Walk- The soft white glitters on the ground. The sparkling crystals frozen. My icy breath lingers in the air in front of me. My throat is cold. Our hands together to warm them up. We walk through the silent cold. You smile at me when you play with the snow. The smile of an angel. The white background to your lovely face is a beautiful contrast. I smile back and think. "What a beautiful day." A walk in the snow. Love and Winter~ ----- O: That one makes me so happy... -------------------
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| Mephisto~656 |
Posted: 27 August 2007, 11:58 AM
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Hehe I love the snow and rain. -Calm- It's dark outside although it is day. The smell is wonderful. I sit by the window. Listening as the droplets hit the glass. It's a calming sound. Although it is dark, It's a beautiful day. I want to feel it on my skin. The cold wetness. It's dark outside although it is day. I go outside and let it drench me. I just stand and enjoy the feel of it. The calming sound of soft rain against hard concrete. ---- -------------------
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| Mephisto~656 |
Posted: 27 August 2007, 08:10 PM
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O: Yaaay the last one -Moonlit Heart- It's dark out here. The breeze smells like rain. The bright stars can still be seen even with the clouds. The full moon lights your eyes, making them sparkle. Our shadows cast over the roof. I glance over to you. You're just sitting, staring at the moon. You shiver slightly. I chuckle softly, but you notice anyway. You push yourself to my side so you can warm up. You look straight into my eyes and tell me that the moonlight makes me look even prettier, I blush slightly. You notice and take my hand in yours. You take another glance at the fully lit moon, Then kiss me softly. So this is what it feels like, To be in love. ---- Just a cute little one ^^ -------------------
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| Magicpet13 |
Posted: 3 September 2007, 10:51 AM
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Mephisto you are right we do write similar. I agree with shugo. Your second poem ~ Paint was my favorite. =] And Winter Walk reminded me a lot of my works too. ^^ You have a good contrast between the happy side of love like Moonlit Heart and the dark side like Mercy. Also I love your titles you are very good at choosing them =) -------------------
![]() Thank you Usaki! ^-^ “Sometimes silence is not golden -- just yellow.” Women of Song ~ Celctic Women |
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| Mephisto~656 |
Posted: 3 September 2007, 08:23 PM
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| ShuShu |
Posted: 3 September 2007, 08:25 PM
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Liked that last one. -------------------
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| animeoutcasts |
Posted: 4 September 2007, 09:14 PM
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I really enjoyed "paint". It made me smile.... -------------------
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| Mephisto~656 |
Posted: 21 October 2007, 10:56 PM
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Heh it's been a while, huh? So, I feel like writing something. Just whatever comes off the top of my head. So if it's bad, you know why. Untitled- I said I'd wait forever for you. I said "I love you," and meant it. But did what I say have meaning at all? Did it have meaning when you said you don't want me right now? I want you now. Now and forever more. I want you to be mine. And never let you go again. I made that mistake last time. I won't let it happen again. Because this time, We'll say "I love you." And this time, You'll mean it too. ------- ^^ Maybe I should read that at PC o.o This next one was written down somewhere, and I don't remember where. So I'll try my best to remember it ^^ (EXPLICIT CONTENT ) Sleeze Bunny- Smear your make up on, Strap up those six inch heels girl, It's time to earn your keep tonight. Sleeze Bunny, come on honey. Lick it up and swallow hard. Don't you want to eat tonight? Lift your skirt and take it in. The silver drool slips down your face You need that money to stay alive. Sleeze Bunny, come on honey. Lick it up and swallow hard. Don't you want to eat tonight? The throw you down. Kick you hard. But you don't care, It's all you got. You start to bleed, Your vision blurs, You don't want to be here anymore. But you strive to stay, You need that money to stay alive. Sleeze Bunny, come on honey. Lick it up and swallow hard. Sleeze Bunny, come on honey. You throw it up, and the tears come fast. Sleeze Bunny, come on honey. Lick it up and swallow hard. Don't you want to eat tonight? They beat you down, Like the filth you are. They love to laugh, And watch you bleed. Dear Sleeze Bunny, You're what I need. -------- Hehehe...I got in trouble for reading that at PC. Soooo, comments are appriciated -------------------
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| Magicpet13 |
Posted: 24 December 2007, 02:32 PM
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Oh the last one I get it now XD I missed the meaning the first time I personally like the second one better than the first. Explicit content and all. Also what does PC stand for? =O -------------------
![]() Thank you Usaki! ^-^ “Sometimes silence is not golden -- just yellow.” Women of Song ~ Celctic Women |
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