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| Utgard Loki |
Posted: 27 January 2006, 08:58 PM
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I just got GIMP about two days ago and I've been fiddling around with it. Now, I know I shouldn't really have a gallery, because I'm just a beginner and my stuff isn't really any good, but I figured some contructive criticism would be good for developing techniques and getting better at this. Just one request...dun laugh. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() I know, I know, they're not good at all. I don't think I'll ever be as good as you veterans, but I'd appreciate any comments you might have. *sweatdrop* Better to learn from the masters, ne? -------------------
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| Kon |
Posted: 27 January 2006, 09:12 PM
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Weee! They are pretty good! -------------------
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| Utgard Loki |
Posted: 28 January 2006, 01:13 PM
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Thanks. I'm trying to get better...but my progress is slow. ._.;; -------------------
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| Ryuji |
Posted: 28 January 2006, 01:20 PM
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ghettoBLASTAH!
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They're quite good for a beginner. The last one though seems a little cluttered. Also, on the first one, you might to move the "Gravity of Love" text up a bit. It'll looked more intune and centered with the other part of the text. |
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| Utgard Loki |
Posted: 28 January 2006, 09:36 PM
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Ah, I didn't notice that. And I agree...the last one is cluttered. >_<;; Thanks for the advice, though. I made another set. It's...plain. I kinda like it though. Even though it's just...plain and boring and not very good. ![]() ![]() Hrm...>.<;; -------------------
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| Sakuya` |
Posted: 29 January 2006, 01:35 AM
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Work on the blending of the stock and typography with thr bg. And try not to clutter them with words. They're good otherwise. |
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| -ithy- |
Posted: 29 January 2006, 08:28 AM
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I think they look really good for a beginner. -------------------
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| Utgard Loki |
Posted: 30 January 2006, 06:54 PM
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I noticed something about my sig making that applies to just about every other skill in my life: I learn how to do it, I get half-way decent, and I don't get any better. ![]() ![]() Star Wars on the brain. Uwaaaaah... -------------------
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| Leviticus |
Posted: 30 January 2006, 08:02 PM
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Ohayo~
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=D I like them a lot. Way better than anything of mine. Anyway. I like your current the most, due to the quote, however. XD The star wars ones are halarious, but the Shinomori one is absolutely pretty. o-o -------------------
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| Utgard Loki |
Posted: 2 February 2006, 12:54 PM
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These I wasn't tryng especially hard on...and you can definitely tell. ._.;; ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() They were more just for fun than anything, but...meh. Whatever. Not gonna get any better unless I try, or...something. -------------------
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| Sakuya` |
Posted: 2 February 2006, 01:23 PM
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Less text, more brushing. And depth too. |
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| Utgard Loki |
Posted: 2 February 2006, 03:17 PM
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I wish I understood what you just said. Maybe I should read a manual or something...I'm not very literate when it comes to specific terms. But as soon as I figure out what that means, I'm going to work on it! o.o ![]() ![]() L. Yeah. =D -------------------
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| Sakuya` |
Posted: 2 February 2006, 03:58 PM
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Text = draws attention away from the stock[picture] More brushing = Gives a chance to create depth and flow. Work on your cutting too. |
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| Utgard Loki |
Posted: 3 February 2006, 04:48 PM
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I hope this one's better...I've been trying to use more brushes. The text is a tad faded looking, but I was trying not to focus on it as much. ._. ![]() Kuhonbutsu Taishi from Comic Party. Fun character... -------------------
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| Sakuya` |
Posted: 3 February 2006, 06:00 PM
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Better. Try not to put texture on the text. |
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| Utgard Loki |
Posted: 3 February 2006, 08:47 PM
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Ah, OK. I did that because I thought the text would be hard to read if I didn't outline it. But I can see what you're saying. ![]() This one was for fun. The idea popped into my head and I had to do it. n_n -------------------
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| Sakuya` |
Posted: 3 February 2006, 08:52 PM
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Stock needs to blend with the bg as does the text. Try playing with the text's opacity. |
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| Leviticus |
Posted: 6 February 2006, 06:46 PM
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Ohayo~
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No red on Bakura = no red should be there. o-o The crossings and border would have been better in a blue. Colors are hard. >.o I absolutely postively love the marauders one. oO It's like. <3 -chucks an apple at you- -------------------
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| Utgard Loki |
Posted: 17 February 2006, 12:43 PM
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*hit by apple* Huu? o.o Ja, well...here's more. I've been slowing down a bit. More things needed to to around here lately. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() w00t. Battlestar Galactica and Potter Puppet Pals. o_O;; -------------------
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| Utgard Loki |
Posted: 24 February 2006, 05:43 PM
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Double post. Shame on me! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Yep. There ya go. More crud from me. But...I think I may be getting a little bit better at this. I hope. o_o -------------------
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