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> First Sig Plz Comment!!!, Bleach sig
Brent3351
Posted: 2 March 2007, 07:53 PM


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Plz comment on how u like my first sig

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arigato.gif Much Appreciation arigato.gif

[I'm also gonna be watching some bleach in the meantime. ph34r.gif ]

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Tatsuki Arisawa
Posted: 2 March 2007, 08:04 PM


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Doesn't blend...at all. Neither does the text or the text bubble, don't only fill every single pixel with a brush (I think danbah said that about someone.). The brightness of the render doesn't go good with the dark backround, try to avoid light to dark.

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Kusajishi Yachiru
Posted: 2 March 2007, 09:44 PM
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The text would look better on a sig that was based around a retro, old horror movie theme. Sort of a "It came from the lagoon behind the grocery store" type thing. The text bubble seems awkward, the way it actually cuts into her mouth. I also find that the dark tones don't really blend with the bubbly nature of the sig.


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Kiku
Posted: 10 April 2007, 11:06 AM


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Quoted(ref) Brent3351 (on 2 March, 2007, 07:53 PM PST)

Plz comment on how u like my first sig

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arigato.gif Much Appreciation  arigato.gif

[I'm also gonna be watching some bleach in the meantime.  ph34r.gif ]

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Zakk I'm on ep 100 in bleach.  sweeeet.gif

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Posted: 18 April 2007, 03:12 PM


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lol! Very Cool. The background could be blended better. Love it. xD
 
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Toushirou Hitsugaya
Posted: 18 April 2007, 05:55 PM
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Not bad, but:
  • The background is a little dark compared to the foreground
  • The background doesn't really match the foreground; while the foreground is bright and has sharp lines, the background has a lot of concentrated detail in spots
  • The font just... doesn't match the mood of the signature; it doesn't seem very horror-film like o-o
  • The shadow effects on the text should be removed... shadow, unless it's subtle enough, usually looks bad
  • The cutting into the mouth is odd. It should either possibly cut in more or not cross into the mouth at all.
  • I can see random grey pixels in the bottom right of the text balloon o.o

Keep practicing!


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danbah
Posted: 21 April 2007, 12:30 AM


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Quoted(ref) Apple-kun (on 2 March, 2007, 08:04 PM PST)

Doesn't blend...at all.  Neither does the text or the text bubble, don't only fill every single pixel with a brush (I think danbah said that about someone.).  The brightness of the render doesn't go good with the dark backround, try to avoid light to dark.

haha, yeah I remember saying that around 2 or 3 times to different users tongue.gif
I agree with what you say here. I don't think the overly cute image suits the horror-like BG. There's just no relationship between image and BG.

I think it just needs more planning. Before you start, have some kind of objective in mind, so you know what you're working towards and how you'll get there. If you know roughly how you want it to look, you'll produce much better looking graphics.

@Kiku: I wish you'd elaborate a little more in your comments. The artist gains nothing from it, and it hardly seems worth your time if you just type one word as a comment.


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