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EverybodyLovesRamen
Posted: 2009-06-30, 09:52 AM


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I'm ELR, this is my gallery.
Constructive criticism is nice. I'm fairly new at photoshop, don't be too harsh. Feel free to ask permission for any unused set or sig.


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- Pyramid Head from silent hill.



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- Kurt Cobain was my idol throughout middle school and high school, so it only seemed right for me to make a sig of him.


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Posted: 2009-06-30, 09:41 PM


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- SLC Punk, Sean's accidental acid trip.
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Posted: 2009-07-02, 11:14 AM


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Quoted(ref) EverybodyLovesRamen (on 30 June, 2009, 10:41 PM PDT)

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- SLC Punk, Sean's accidental acid trip.

Lol, epic.


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Posted: 2009-07-04, 09:08 PM


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- Code Geass: Lancelot Albion
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Posted: 2009-07-06, 08:22 PM


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- Lancelot, Code Geass. The last one didn't turn out so well, following a new tutorial with a new render, and of course incorporating my own ideas, this is the result.
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Posted: 2009-07-08, 09:08 AM


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- Alex Mercer, Prototype. Loving the game right now. Wanted a more original sig, so I went for a cartoonish, animated, feel. Couldn't find any good in-game scenery so I ended up taking an actual NY street view and editing it down to the same feel. I think it turned out pretty neat.
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Posted: 2009-07-17, 09:40 PM


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- Nabari no Ou, Miharu and Yoite. Didn't really know what to do with this, so I took the Van Halen guitar stripes and went over it. Had Nabari sit on top of it all, Yoite behind the darker stripes, in front of the lighter ones. Think it turned out pretty neat.
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Posted: 2009-07-19, 10:59 AM


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The prototype sig is your best so far. :/

As for your most recent, I'm not sure I like the color combo of purple and green, just an aesthetic choice really. You've got contrasting flow elements, and composition problems. I think I could help more by marking up the piece, if you'd be okay with that.


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Posted: 2009-07-21, 02:33 PM


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Quoted(ref) Kurinshin (on 19 July, 2009, 11:59 AM PDT)

The prototype sig is your best so far. :/

As for your most recent, I'm not sure I like the color combo of purple and green, just an aesthetic choice really. You've got contrasting flow elements, and composition problems. I think I could help more by marking up the piece, if you'd be okay with that.

Sure, no problem. Just lemme know if you need anything in addition to the pic.
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Posted: 2009-07-21, 02:35 PM


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- an Audi from NFS. This was a lot of fun, used a bunch of clipping masks, think it turned out pretty neat. Only thing I wish I could'e done better is the lettering...
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Posted: 2009-07-21, 11:25 PM


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Fix the border, it looks like the effects are on top of it wiping some of it away.

Other than that looks great, text could use work but it's all right for now. imo it's your best so far.


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Posted: 2009-07-22, 11:55 AM


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Hope that helps some.

As for your latest, definitely your best so far, but like xFlcl said, border is weird, and so is the text, work on that and it will be better.


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Posted: 2009-07-22, 02:07 PM


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Lol Yeah about the border, instead of just making a plain one around the image, I thought I'd try and switch it up by copying the image into the background and just expanding it a little, then invert. Turned out a little weird on the bottom.

And thanks kurin for the markings, I might try to redo it sometime. I'll keep those in mind.
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Posted: 2009-07-26, 05:34 PM


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- Shinigami-sama, Soul Eater. Screen shot, self rendered. Awesome anime.
(some of it was cropped out in the screen shot, so I had to draw it in. Nothing noticeable)
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Posted: 2009-08-16, 05:08 PM


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Request from Mr. Long Name:

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Names:

Made a few extra edits later on, never upped them, but I tried a few changes and Long settled on just having the sig a little longer.
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Posted: 2009-08-24, 11:36 PM


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- Flareon, Pokemon.
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Posted: 2009-08-25, 05:55 AM


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I like this one! and in this case, the text works! Though I would suggest making the black text a different color, and turning down the opacity. You've established a sense of flow, but my only complaint would be that there's not enough going on. :I
Try adding in some more effects, maybe a fractal to help the flow, as well as to blend in your focal.
Also, the negative space on the left side needs to be filled, or at least executed better, because right now it just cuts off into black. Good job man, keep it up!


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Posted: 2009-08-25, 06:25 PM


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Thanks Kurin for the c/c. I was trying to add onto the space at the left, but it wasn't working out and the sig seemed to be lacking without it... I guess I'd just use that extra space later on to add a name or something. Still learning flow and effects so any pointers would be awesome!


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Posted: 2009-08-25, 06:29 PM


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Another new sig:

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- Neku from 'The World Ends With You.'
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Posted: 2009-08-25, 07:30 PM


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That's pretty BA right there. o.o

A little sharpened in too parts on my screen. But it looks great. Only complaint is the border, it's thicker on top and to the left, yet skinny on the right and bottom. o.o;

Anyway, gotta say I like it. :'D

As for the Flareon siggie, the left is empty. D: Other than that it's nice. :'D Font is good too.


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