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> some pretty darn good poems
kyoui
Posted: 2008-02-15, 11:46 AM


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Hi I'm kyoui and I love to write poems when I'm either in love, or when I'm emo..

I've got a nice little game going on. the rules: I write a poem for a girl I like, She rejects me (like usual), then I go for a different girl and get to know her, then I write her a poem, she rejects me, etc.. etc.. etc.. my goal is to get rejected as many times as possible!

....and I'm winning.. D:

so I'm gonna put some love poems up, maybe some emo love aftermath poems.. to people that might appreciate it because girls in my town definitely don't..

here's the first poem

Girl: Can't tell you this one. she's on KAF sometimes and will beat me If I reveal her name D:

Summary: I liked her a lot last year and I hung out with her like every day for like 3 months. we were practically best friends so I wrote her a poem asking her to be my girlfriend. here it is:

I Love You ********

I've liked some girls a lot before
But never quite like this
It's always been because their looks
Their style or their kiss

But now there's one that beats them all
I'd do anything for her
There's something deep inside of me
That says it's her for sure

No other girl matches with
Her personality
And every time I see her face
She sets my spirit free

I've liked her for about a year
But never used the chance
To tell her how I really feel
Or on a date, hold hands

She's constantly inside my mind
She's all I think about
She is the girl that's meant for me
There surely is no doubt

So that is how I feel 'bout you
From my eyes it's what I see
And will you tell me ********
What do you think of me?

Result: She liked the poem but she gave me the "I only like you as a friend" line...

I'll update some more poems when I have time biggrin.gif


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kyoui
Posted: 2008-02-17, 01:37 AM


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This poem I wrote as an assignment in school last year. I was going through a hard time. It is probably my favorite.

The Lonely Monument

The desparate plea of a love-struck boy
The famous high school infatuation
One's person's love, the pleasure and joy
The other's destruction with rejection

The one person built up a shrine of love
Not knowing it would be blown to pieces
By that cursed line that hits you so rough
"My love is somewhere else"... Pain Increases

The shrine that was built will always be there
Waiting alone to be re-erected
By someone who appreciates his care
And to his shrine she builds one connected

But until that day, It waits all alone
A love that's expressed, unseen in the stone


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Tierra
Posted: 2008-02-17, 08:05 PM


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I love this poem. Sonnets usually aren't my thing, but you wrote this beautifully.
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