Poetic Loss of Justice
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Poetic Loss of Justice| Itu |
Posted: 2008-01-30, 07:43 PM
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Teehee!  Gee you sure know how to make me feel amazing. <333 x3Yay for understanding! Understanding is GOOD. :3 -------------------
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| Sagara Sanosuke |
Posted: 2008-01-31, 07:07 AM
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Good cause you are amazing. Yes understanding is good. I need to do more of it though. Hahaha~   -------------------
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Posted: 2008-01-31, 11:05 AM
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xDDD Ah gee~ You make me laugh so~ <333 *Curls up in a ball and sleeps until next poetic outburst* -------------------
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| Sagara Sanosuke |
Posted: 2008-01-31, 11:26 AM
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Awww I try. <3 -walks out of thread until the next poetic outburst- Be back soon. <3 -------------------
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| Magicpet13 |
Posted: 2008-02-23, 09:15 PM
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 Don't let yesterday use up too much of today
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*weeps*  That last entry of yours was just so...gorgeous...and beautiful.... *sniffle* ;_; I must say you are Shakespeare reborn! SHaKESPEARETTE! *I bow to you*  -------------------
Thank you Usaki! ^-^ Women of Song ~ Celctic Women |
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| Itu |
Posted: 2008-07-30, 10:03 PM
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... *Blushes terribly* ...thank you. *Bows humbly* * ~~~ * Times have fallen away into categories long misplaced. This is a poem of a shorter kind. There are mirrors and dreams, and unfathomable things, locked away in the Beyond given to each of our minds. However, there is but a story to tell, a wisdom in each, a quiet, grieving knell. What sorrows do you carry, that these tales must I bear? Till time has left you this, smallest and most peculiar gift, like wings and smiles, and fantasies beguiled, suddenly born again into such small, tender shape. A circle, no less. Infinity, our crest. And glorious our strands of hair. The whisper of relief. Of freedom, its chief, belonging to wizened and hardened laws of the world in which we sleep. Our grief, our peace, so long, my thief, blue hued and ebon eyed, beneath this, starry-skied expanse! You are a wish, dropped down from heaven, a dream unlike glory, a song without glare, tender and comforting... A pearl. -------------------
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| Magicpet13 |
Posted: 2008-07-31, 11:52 AM
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Oh! Just as perfect as I remembered! :3 I must ask you, what is your inspiration? -------------------
Thank you Usaki! ^-^ Women of Song ~ Celctic Women |
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| Itu |
Posted: 2008-07-31, 12:45 PM
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God. *Smiles faintly* I can't tell you where else they come from, because... who else gave me my life, my gifts and abilities? Were they decided by genomes and bits of dust that one day smacked together and made-- Ta-dah~!-- the world? No. Every time I doubt whether God exists, or I wonder "where did we all come from?" I do a very simple thing that makes me realize that we were put here on Earth by a being far greater than ourselves. I look down at my hands. And look at them... the creases in my skin, and--even closer--see the smaller creases? And then, a bit more, and there are yet more lines of a pattern I doubt I'll ever understand. I close my hand--just a bit! And watch as the skin and muscles move, watch as my fingers obstruct my view. I run my thumb over the tips of my fingers, just... taking a moment to feel. I close my hand into a fist, move it back, and look to my wrist, the veins, then suddenly thrust my hand in the air, and stare down the length of my arm, turning it slightly, looking over the shape... ...this was made by someone. How could it be that from such small things would come something living, breathing, moving, growing! Something so big as me! It's impossible. I should not exist. What could have made me? *Smiles* Only God, I believe. That is the answer to everything that I am and will ever be. He has given me so many blessings, and I can only strive to do my best to fulfill the rest of the promises He has for me. <3 -------------------
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Posted: 2008-12-15, 03:29 AM
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Saenti'allen, ferru'ssu mektin, tiilastnu~ Phrases beyond self, a charismatic embrace, perhaps unfettering of dissonance, loss beyond unyeilding, enamored strains of otherworldly demises, my characteristics~ Count the raindrops, note their patterns, see the spellcasting? Witness you the whispers, my ethereal trills, their undying resonance, my contemplations~ Loss without candid regalia, tears unlike any ever seen... Delight~ What of purest embraces? Of enamored professions of the lips and undue frames, our ballad of harmonious discord, endless nights spent in tender fluttering of fingers, ghosting smiles, like the wisps of some long forgotten flame, a hue beyond the dismal grays, see the stars? Even through the rain? I am but reaching, arms spread wide above head, mouth parts in congratulations, no! Elation! A smile then, a faint, abrupt laugh, to hear what they said~ In lilting response, in unseen light of evening's tapestral ways, rays of sunlight, of mind, I will banish. Of the stars, faded from sight, from heart, no impression required, wanted, ever needed, I look to different paths, and in such, Continues my enamored dance~ Of heart, so of mind, Half light, half life, but within such steps, soiled and marred by unending rains, I am ne'er without sight, in so glorious to me, dismal to all, this unending night. Tembarden, subeth, kiilarfu bendu, himesuten, maii aiiss, threthull~ Written to the theme Reunion, from the Armitage III: Poly-Matrix OST. -------------------
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| Mister Magick |
Posted: 2008-12-18, 05:21 PM
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*applauds* i won't waste words I'll simply leave it at one. Beautiful. -------------------
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Posted: 2008-12-19, 05:43 AM
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 Mahmah read my poetry~?! *Happy wiggle~!* Yay~!! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, Mahmah~! <333 -------------------
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Posted: 2009-01-29, 03:30 PM
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I want wisdom, not for the reasons some might presume, but to leave behind a trail of cradles, left barren and consumed, by hatred, and sorrow, and misery alike, rendered infantile in this unseemly might, I do hate the thoughts that poison my mind, just sometimes, sometimes~ Wisdom is lost on the fallen daughters, the sons left to die for causes I never knew, that at times, I swear I would destroy worlds to deny, but why such torment, why this fell intent and disgrace to my heart, when clearly I am just sorrowful as the lost daughter, left behind, no place to vent~ I am lost as every child, without place, nor home, to return to in this fleeting life, but where shall I head, if clearly all in my sight, is a disaster, a cry for help, gainless, my wisdoms shot down, for the profit of only the self, where can I turn to, to whom will I lie, to find this miracle of salvation, so long been decried? "Reach out to me," He'd call, and I, I'd just cry, and though my arms stretched towards Heaven, forever will I deny, this need? No~ This pain? Never~ Am I worthy? Ah~ And there, there lies the wickedness of injustice brought alive~ I want to run into Your arms, bury myself in Your sweet embrace, feel the warmth of Your undying heart, fall into blissful sleep at the songs of Your grace~ But wandering I am, such a miserable child, not wanting to return, because of all the lies... Save me, please, my Lord? I know you can enter in, but... I am so... unworthy and disgraced... I cannot replace what you have given me, and in my heart, it tears me apart! That I am so vulnerable, so weak, so utterly incapable of ever replacing the Son you had lost~ And oh, He lives, I know... But I am still a child, and must grow... Forgive me, Lord... I am so awkward, and still, still...! I shy away, I do not understand this love you give, for I am just me, and though many lives I've lived, forgive me my ignorance, Lord, for I do not understand... Will I ever? I must! Because without you, how will I stand? I am a lost child... and the Devil whispers sweetened lies into my heart, but you are my cure, cliche as it might be, and forgive me, forgive me! Without you... I am... Nothing. -------------------
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Posted: 2009-01-30, 06:06 PM
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I was looking over my work, and all the poems that I've put up in this thread, and I've realized that--much like other people used to tell me--I really dislike a lot of my old poems. And even some of the better ones don't really inspire me anymore. Their meanings have been lost on me, or they simply seem pathetic and ridiculous. But I read them all over again~ And a few stuck out at me. I just... felt like listing them below, I guess for my own reference later on. A Sixty-Two Armed Flute of a Girl - [x] The Unfinished Dream - [x] During Halo's Fancy - [x] Nodding, and three unnamed pieces - [x] Unnamed piece - [x] Unnamed piece - [x] Unnamed piece - [x] What really kind of blows my mind is that... The first one, A Sixty-Two Armed Flute of a Girl... I swear I could have written that very piece about my RP character Altura! But... I didn't create her until afterwards... Then... how...? ...what mysteries lie in my intentions, that even I cannot predict what seeds I've sown before they've blossomed~? -------------------
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| Sagara Sanosuke |
Posted: 2009-02-08, 04:52 AM
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I guess it makes me a loyal fan in the fact that I remember reading every one of these poems that you've listed, and upon rereading them I agree with you, they are some of your best works. However I must address that I don't like unnamed poetry pieces. An unnamed poem is like a neglected child~!!! D< -ahem- -------------------
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Posted: 2009-02-08, 04:00 PM
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o_o;; OH DEAREST ME. Dx Well, the unnamed pieces are unnamed precisely because when first written they were more like moments of euphoria, and deep insight and exumation (did I use that word correctly?), rather than actual attempts at poetry. They were, more or less, in essence~ Something akin to free writes~ In which I just wrote what was foremost on my mind~ More then one of them cover multiple subjects in each. So naming them based on one thing would be tricky, perhaps~? I will look over them, and see if certain words rise to the surface. Usually, that's how I write. I feel--I know, I am... thus, I write~ -------------------
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| Sagara Sanosuke |
Posted: 2009-02-09, 08:50 AM
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When I do that the title is usually just the date that it is written. So I cheat, but still. >8D I haven't done a free-write in a little bit, hopefully will do one in class today [creative writing]. And yes you did use that word correctly :3. I like how you said that. I feel _ I know, I am _ thus, I write. Lol that's catchy I like it. <333 -------------------
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Posted: 2009-02-09, 06:55 PM
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It's just the honest to God truth~ It's how I write, how I think. In my writing, I am honest with myself. Even on the occassions where I don't want to be, or I refuse to do that with myself in real life. Writing, is essentially the key to my soul, my heart, my very mind~ If you have that, what else is there--I feel. And surely, there's more to it~ I've learned that a writer must flourish in body as much as in mind in order for the written word to mirror that health. That's why I believe my previous writings were hapless ditties, without thought, without foreclosure of intent. They were there, and meant little. Because an unstable person in mind is not necessarily always unhealthy in body, but when the condition infects all parts of a human being, then everything suffers. What potential once they had deteriorates along with their every gift and asset. They become as worthless as those without a mind, without a heart--for if they are bodily decaying, all else will follow. It lies in greatest amazement, that there are countless of thousands of people in our history that can and have overcome the body's nature and infinite desires. Not all their methods do I respect, and some I still doubt. However~ I am still searching down the path I have chosen in life. What things I learn along the way, are yet to be guessed--by me, at the very least. *Smiles* Ah~ And I went off a tangent~ I will return to my homework now. <3 -------------------
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Posted: 2009-05-06, 06:58 AM
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I can't get it out of my head~
Dare you ask, time and time again, wherefore have I fled? I am temptress pursued avidly, amidst flames and desires of lifelong insult, take me, at hand, waist preferred, laughter adjourning and flit away with I--the endlessness of sensation! I am admirable, profane and guttural, the symphonic dancing of our hearts entwined, given me life! Whether rain or shine, step forward, naught to define, my emblem but a part of this temperamental system, your eyes fleeting in as much as mine are laughing, endlessly, I cannot be extinguished. Flee from them, I will then embrace for our sorrows have passed, our songs now take flight and to the heavens we bid our response to sun's farewell, bring on the moonlight. Thunder might echo in warning, to me, it is a sign of delight! Whatever are you searching out, that such a grimace I find poisoning the potential of a drought in heart, in mind--you are fell in your awkwardness. Sit silent! Never! I am the one to drag you far away from comforts, shed your skin with deft scalpel, scrape away all perverse insights! Take me or leave me, I am your heart as once distraught by your unconditional fears and made the stronger by freedom not granted by wings. Unlike song-twiddling the mockingbird, I am your foundation, for skies lie on my breasts as do endless harmonies thrash about in my fierce blades of eyes, blushing thunder stifles your hesitant cries! I am your condemnation by your own might or your gift of pleasantry and foresight, endless this night, your shepherd's heart misguided by over-thought, where else should our steps be swift and blind, I know the paths will collide, but of that I have no qualms. You are so stubborn in your premonitions, and if you would not take my lead, I will steal away this heart of mine, your endearing couplet a mere leash towards candlelight! Stars unveiled, I'd gladly rip from you all senses to let you fathom these sights! I am a myriad of thoughts, existence is far from denied me, I am the couple you wish to be, the ticket from death into harmonics of entropy! Discard me? You couldn't if you'd tried. I am the pungent heart you hide. A wink, a turn, a sweeping step, a dance unified! To freedom I beckon, yours alone to deny. But I, oh I! I alone do not shy, nor is any end but joy mine! Cast me aside, I am your hope, your very guide, into every mystery of noumena denied! My laughter is the finale. -------------------
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